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Poem Number 559
When the river flows
Cold, clear water swirls in eddies
Turtles bask on logs
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ShameI can't thank you by name, but the last two lines are great.. love them..Alice..
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Shame is my syllable counter got wacked. ...110
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110::Sometimes they just stick, a little. That's from all the sweetness
you'll find around here.--GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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the normal 5-7-5 has become somewhat abnormal 110
I say -if it feels good -write it..........39
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