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Poem Number 548
yellow smoke slides along
Dark cobbled streets and alleys
Beware its poison
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Not sure about the last line.. any takers?? ..Alice..
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how about-- Leaves no survivors..........39
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or perhaps....my hatred unleashed.....zendo
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great!! I love both of those.. thank you..Alice..
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