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Poem Number 541
soft shifting shadows
submerged somewhere so secret
lights cannot divulge


Commentary:
Ooops.sorry 'bout not using "S" words, just realized what I did....DRQ
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strictly silhouettes .......39
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safe sanctuary,,,,,zendo
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Shrouded salvation....Alice..
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slithering savior...Blue Swan
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ummmmmm i dunno Blue Swan.......sounds like a metaphor for something else....( start the cheesy 70's music)..zendo
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bow-chica bow bow-bow....Blue Swan
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That's cheesy 70's porno music.
~O~ Coyote ~O~

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you recognized it coyote????...39
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Doesn't everyone?
~O~ Coyote ~O~

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sincere slurping sounds ...110
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alright 110, keep it up!!!!!!.....39
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You wicked, wicked children! Next time, ask my permission first.
~O~ Coyote ~O~
(who's no one to call you children - I don't turn 18 for 3 weeks)

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Yes, mom. I'll go stand in the corner. We've been naughty again. - Blue Swan
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sorry mistress coyote...zendo
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Mistress Coyote. Has an interesting ring to it...I ought to remember that.
~O~ Mistress Coyote ~O~

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ill mention it again while im licking your ankles..zendo
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Where do you people belong... I love the Haiku on these pages but the commentary is like something from a Mills and Boon soapy....:)) .. Alice..
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They have dominatricies on soap operas where you live? Whoah. I'm just kidding around, anyhow. By nature, I wouldn't be very good at it.
~O~ Coyote ~O~

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