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Poem Number 526
In sensless acts of
Random violence, the children
Always seem to pay.


Commentary:
So true Coyote, they only know what is good.If only we could live, love and learn like the children.....DRQ
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The children are the only innocent ones. Yet lately, they've been a major target. Tell me, where is the world going to go when all the children know about is violence?
~O~ Coyote ~O~

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O Coyote O,
I dare say to hell if we cannot find a way to stop the insanity. I marvel
how people so often try to find outside reasons for the wickedness of the
world when they only need look within. We must become a people who take
responsibility for our actions and choices and stop finding others to blame
for our misdeeds. Then and only then will the sufferring stop. This is my
opinion. I would not wish to debate it for I fear others would not agree.
From personal experience I know that standing up and admiting our errors and
taking full responsibility and punishment for them makes a difference. People
take notice of such action, they think your nuts for doing it, but they take
notice and in a positive way. Sorry I got on a soap box. Please forgive me.
opto
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No problem. Somebody has to stand up and speak out on this, or nothing is gonna change.
~O~ Coyote ~O~

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We should never be afraid of having an opinion.. and we should always be prepared to stand on a soap box for the innocent!! Highly commendable...
Can they count on us
To stand up and be counted
For their injustice?
..Alice..
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Alice,
Though I agree 100% with sharing opinions I have gotten myself into much hot
water over the years in such modes. In my past days in Haiku land etc. I
have pissed many a person off as well. It was one of the reasons I left I
felt I had worn out my welcome. Well take care and I really do agree with
you.
opto
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Opto, I sure hope you will stay here this time, good writers are too precious and rare..And I can't think of anything anyone could write in Haiku ( well maybe a couple of things) that would get up people's noses...Anyhow I'm looking forward to reading more of your work, take care...Alice..
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god knows ive been up a few noses in here,but opions are welcome opto,the same passion with which we write must find expression in other ways......its who we are......zendo
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errrrrrrrrrr thats opinions.........dam tequila.....zendo
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