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Poem Number 424
Look at me softly
While your silence steals my soul
Through caressing eyes
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Back for a second shot at it.
Ashe
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Ashe::It's hard to believe you are a new poet. This is very perceptive. Do
keep them coming.--GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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Ashe this is beautiful. What a talent you have! ~Quiche~
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You drained me of words and only my actions survived.
Bf
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Ashe----This is wonderful reading thank-you,,,,38
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Read this several times, and really like your words. Keep it up
DaRedQueen
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GrandmaThing, I don't know if it was really perceptive. It was just a moment (one of what I hope will be many) BF-with out actions there are no words!~Quiche~,38,DaRedQueen, thank you.
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Well, it was a great moment!! DaRedQueen
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