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Poem Number 396
I am becoming...
Escaping from within you...
Breathing on my own.
from becoming to being,,now a woman
from becoming to now being...a woman


Commentary:
Ahhh...binary fission. Howard (rearing his ugly head around here again)
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Exactly, Howard...~Quiche~(to the binary fission comment, not that your head is ugly)
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Are you attempting to interject some sort of opinion regarding the topographical status of my noggin? My dear, for an egg-based confectionary you certainly have got moxie! Howard (don't step in his blue suede shoes, or on them, for that matter)
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Howard dear, perhaps you misread my comment. I wanted to make it clear that your noggin was a beautiful one, and you did not think that I was aiming that "exactly" back at YOUR "rearing his ugly head" comment, but instead, towards the "binary fission" comment that summed up what I was saying in two words rather than 17 syllables. I may be egg-based, but I also am full of cheese. ~Q~
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Hi Quiche...Howard has no ability (yet) to respond without misconstruing things badly. Howard wants to evolve as badly as the rest of us, but it's just a sticky part of his incendiary nature. I am currently working on developing Howard's character to the point at which this is evident and more benign (thus amusing). Of COURSE he understood your comment through and through, he just likes to start things. He says stuff like that and then reads it aloud thinking it's really funny, so..er..I'm working on that facet of his persona. ---z (thanks for being patient)
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QuichMarie::Glad to hear it! You have said a mouthful. By the way, where
is a new selection from your Miniquiches? Haven't seen anything since
that long lost rabbit went into hiding from ~glimpsed~(miss him too)
Ask them to submit more, if they have time.--MommaThing--May you know love!
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