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Poem Number 315
I fear you have made
a grave mistake. I am not
Your Marionette
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-dreamer
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Dreamer: This really speaks for me. Thanks for the words. Keep writing for us. I always enjoy reading your work. ~Quiche~
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dreamer,
No one wants to be controlled by another. It just takes some of us a long
time to realize were being controlled. Well done.
opto
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Dreamer--Oh, how many times I could have said this very thing! So clever! If you don't mind, I think I'll log it for future potential use :-) ~~~Nita~~~
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Nita: knock yourself out...glad you enjoyed it.
-dreamer
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