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Haiku - Three
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Poem Number 3
California moves
Riding a granite skateboard
Trundling to the north.
Commentary:
i think this is good work --thom
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Thom, Thank you. --lanie
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Lanie, I love this image. It really has punch! The childlike skateboard, the
utterly devastating prospect of the trundling. Really intense! Lida Jo
P.S. I have a wonderful almost-granddaughter whom we call Lanie! So I am fond
of the name. But you earned my fondness for your poetry all on your own.
I hope you will post something new in the main salon. LJ
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