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Poem Number 278
wait for me
there in the bedroom
i`ll be there
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after i lock
the doors and tuck in
the children
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fell asleep
but who wouldn`t though
after all
Commentary:
This is very good and now I'm snoring...too bad I'm not domestic or mature enough to appreciate this to in all of its suburban beauty...
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Nice extended 3-5-3. So typical.--Thing
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i`m learning------classic38------------
by the way i have no kids ha ha ha
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Classic 38--a good writer can create anything-if he tries hard enough.-Thing
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