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Poem Number 277
bit your lip softly
in a way i knew you`d like
lets go to my room
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soft slow caresses
making you weak in the knees
and your smile tells all
Commentary:
Yow. It's high noon on my sundial. My knees are jello and I can't quit smilin'...good poem. ---zizi
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Ditto here, Classic, you'll have jello'd knees and smiling faces all over haikuland if you keep this up.
I think I need to stop reading your poems, before, in desperation, I invite my husband back home. No, I am
stronger that, I will just go eat some cake instead. ~~Q~~
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thats funny Q....tell you what i wont call my ex if you dont call yours........What kind of cake we talkin about???classic38
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carrot cake...~QM~
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vegetables do not belong in cakes €€€€QM€€€€
i wouldn`t put chocolate and whip cream on your brussle sprouts!!!!!!!()()()classic38()()()
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Oh Baby! See me smile-- :-) ~~~N~~~
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I see
it every time
i close my eyes
nita thought you might like it
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you've gone and done it again baby! those butterflies are back in my stomach and it makes me sure i want to meet you now....redhotmwf
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