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Poem Number 235
Ribboned highway spools
weaves and bekons on the moon -
leaving me behind.
Commentary:
2nd line should be - weaves and bekons to the moon.
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bekons? beckons!
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Bek. Ola. Jeff Bek. Julian Bek.
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