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Poem Number 232
Watch me swim among
The kelp and with open mouth
Delicately chant
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In strings of rising
Bubbles your name is written
In the brine, Mother.
Commentary:
by tom'99
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Tom::Gee! I thought it was written: "This is a good one." Nice
catchy bubbles. Thingy--Really like the second, especially.
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I like this work, tom'99, terrific images. Lida Jo
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Developed from a 'proper' poem that is somewhere in High crit solo 2, called "To a drowned child", well, the bubble part anyway.
Lida jo- just "tom" will do. Actually, come to think of it call me anything you like...tom
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*Any*thing? Hoo boy, *that's* open to interpretation! --eritain
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Tom: No wonder I couldn't find you. Was writing in HC2 forgot solo. Will go look again. Thingy
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interpret away, fine sir!...tom
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