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Poem Number 2
You silly mango
your grapefruits are loose again
Why don't you get them?
this poem sucks
Commentary:
I was tempted to add:
"and Juice is loose too"
but am waiting for someone to propose a better (nicer?) line. --lanie
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Do you like:
"tropical break out"
better? --lanie
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How about:
Crate those fruits next time.
--lanie
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