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Haiku - Three
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Poem Number 1920
living water flows
dead water still
rain falls
trickling slowly
smoke rocks
A dead body in the river
toss a coin
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line n. 2 could read
"dead water still carries life:
Line n. 3
"Just look in the pool"
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