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Poem Number 191
Say I'm Pegasus
No way I'm taking schrapnel
For you, Hercules.


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BRAVO!!! kgb stand and take a bow:-)
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Uhh..thankuh, thankuvermushah......
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well done, and witty.......applause,,,,,,,,,,marleen
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20th century narcissism--undermining military discipline even amongst the flying horse corps. Is he at least available for high altitude bombing? Mitch
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(hee hee ....) Perhaps I am undermining an ancient friendship based on war tactics, but if it were me (and thank the gods that it wasn't) I'd strap a glider on old Herc and go teach flying lessons at Cub Scout meetings. ---kgb
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kgb::Just be sure to keep your rearguard up when you bow.
Fun piece. Good thinking. ___ThisThing___63
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