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Poem Number 1905
soft lips deny
in morning light, what lurks
in eyes at night.
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Commentary:
soft lips deny at night
what lurks in eyes
at morning's light
prisoner of sunlit eyes
your heart admits
but your mouth denys
2 second Ku..trying to get it right but i have to run....any ideas?..dra
Haven't been here in mnths!
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PS the above comment had 2 3-line kus...dra
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