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Haiku - Three


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Poem Number 1890
where bright dreams collide
multicolored shards scatter
bits of you and me


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Excellent collaboration! That tremendous first line is capped with an image just as strong. It is hard to cap someone else's brillian image, but this is just an outstanding example of success. May I put it in my "Haikus to Keep" place? Lida Jo from Idaho (we've moved back, so I really am from Idaho again.)

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