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Poem Number 1829
God! I know you are out there...why can't I accept myself, why can't I be loved for me.
Commentary:
because God is not OUT THERE....he's IN HERE...
(pointing into your heart)...
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at heart I love what's
perfect, and seeing myself
that's not what I see
~
yet I've learned that
what is, ain't as real as
what's gonna be
~
God's taught that,
but we're such students
as don't hear
~
--eritain
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God is there and feels your hurt. But most of the time, we aren't paying attention to anything but our needs and our wants, instead of listening to our instructions. But I love you if that helps.....come here and let mama kiss it better.....it's hard for SOME of us to love ourselves when we have told how unattractive or unlovable we are.Or how our faults are pointed out to us time and again.But my heart cries out to the abused....I DO LOVE....and if someone accepts it in all of it's pure unadulterated then a innocence, that's all I ask...
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God is there and feels your hurt. But most of the time, we aren't paying attention to anything but our needs and our wants, instead of listening to our instructions. But I love you if that helps.....come here and let mama kiss it better.....it's hard for SOME of us to love ourselves when we have told how unattractive or unlovable we are.Or how our faults are pointed out to us time and again.But my heart cries out to the abused....I DO LOVE....and if someone accepts it in all of it's pure unadulterated innocence, that's all I ask...Just Love us...
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