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Poem Number 124
Dental work and love
go together hand in glove
to perfect your smile.
Commentary:
eritain: may this be where you were leading. Never tried this form before. Thing
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eritain & helpers,
I like this. light and uplifting. a great collaboration from start
to finish.
opto
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I love it. I'm still smiling, albeit through crooked teeth. LJ
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Orthodontic work
Would straighten that smile of yours
But there's no love there.
--eritain
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Bless you, Eritain! LJ
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Eritain speaks much truth but I don't think there is much hope for my teeth-B.A.S.I.L.
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Lida dear ...
that was *haiku.*
*Hai-choo!* is the one you say "bless you" for.
--eritain
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Haiku - thank you
Hai-choo - bless you
Hai-coo - pretty bird
Any additions? Lida Jo
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