Longmeadow sunset
Fill me with tapioca
Lips receive your dream

After reading this several times I finally feel I understand it. I like this
because it made me think and it was a challenge doing so. Excellant.
opto
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Is this one obscene or what?
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Obscene? what rock did you crawl out from? I get a real picture. I agree with opto. good job.
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Remember, obscene means blatantly sexual with no regard for morality or
conscience. Erotic means sexual in nature but not necessarily obscene.
Evocative means to suggest an image. Provocative means to provoke an image.
This poem seems evocative to me. Does this make sense to the one who asked
the question about 'obscene'? Lida Jo