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Poem Number 1042
The twilight's hood
rises, showing the sunlight
a glorious morn'
Commentary:
twilight in the hood
kids survived another night
mothers sigh relief
~Q~
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alice and DRQ...your poem turned out beautifully...
hope you don't mind my posting the poem that alice's
first line conjured up in me...~Q~
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Thanks quiche, and I dont mind at all. Thats what makes this place so great, we all have such different views, but they are always accepted.Like the way yours turned out................DRQ
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