twisting in the wind
one last futile try to hide
dying butterfly

twisting in the wind
is much harder than it looks
ask chubby checker.........zendo(showing his age)
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twisting in the wind
distorted branches bow down
leaves curve and collapse ......DRQ

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twisting in the wind
waiting for the phone to ring
where are you tonight?
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Twisting in the wind
Lone hawk wheeling and dipping
Lord of the slip stream....Alice..
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Very nice Alice, beautiful image : ).....Tessy
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twisting in the wind
vibrations sending murmurs
past vocal chording
--GrandmaThing--Boy! You guys are good!(Alright-gals too!)
May you know love!
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love that 2nd line GrandmaThing.. it is so good to see you.. from my heart to yours, May you know love...Alice..
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VIC: Don't think I've seen your work before but this is very impressive.
If you're new here- Welcome Aboard!-GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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Beautiful finish vic : )....Tessy
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thanks for the compliments and the warm welcome, yes, i am new here, found this site yesterday night, couldn't stop reading (and i wanted to go to bed early!) this is my first haiku, didn't think it would be so much fun (and after such a wonderful first line it was no problem to get inspired for a finish), i don't have much time - but whenever possible i'll stop by here to read, to get enchanted, and maybe even to deliver some great finishes ;o)____vic
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excellent verse! grand entrance Vic ...robbynl