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Poem Number 960
bagpipes hollow drone
O’er the Heather filled fields
dewed with widows' tears
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one of those that make me say "man, wish I'd written that".. so, so very good....A..
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wow....excellent work,and RAS that last line.... beautiful,thank you both for this its perfect....zendo
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Very heart wrenching RAS. Like it bunches....m4r
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thanks, folks - but you set it up, after all, all I had to do was connect the dots....RAS
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RAS: Now I remember why I missed all of you so much during my broken
computer time. You do marvelous things to my spirit.--GrandmaThing--
May you know love and lots of email.
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well, glad it was only a silicon crash & not the carbon machine... and that the Postman still delivers.....RAS
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