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Poem Number 2098
walk through the rain
jacket pockets loaded
with potatoes
Commentary:
wlak through the rain
jacket pockets loaded
with her kisses
jim
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Walking in the rain
a rocket in my pocket
Turn loose the juice boy
---"Dick Burns"
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Walk through the rain
jacket pockets loaded
with all my belongings
caught cheating
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