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Poem Number 2062
The darkness which has settled in my soul,
messes with my very thoughts, what is truly just my own, nothingness is mine
Can not you try to see as I see? The death of those whoes souls are free, Atleast I know by end of sun that nothingness is mine,
Don't sorrow for me for tears you will shed, will wash the spots for which I've bled, I leave behind to all I own that nothingness is mine,
Does these few lines speak to your soul, mean nothing to you? Not at all, and as you read take what I own.
For nothingness is mine.


Commentary:
Nothingness is everyones
They can have it
without asking.
We all posess it, we just don't all have it at hand.
Great poem. I know you. We have fed together at one time. Remember?
Lucas?
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Tami, your poem seems sad, but oh, honey, your talent makes me dance. Lida Jo from Union, O.
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Uh no I do not know a Lucas.
I think you mistaked me for someone else Lucas, sorry.
-Tami
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