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Poem Number 2061
Weep for me, ghost-girl
and let your ectoplasm
drip saline nodules.
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Wow. Crazy. Reminds me of SciFaiku. It seems like it could be tightened up some but I can't see where, so maybe that's just me being cranky and critical again. Nice work, and very distinct. --eritain
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SciFaiku....I like that idea heheh might have to play around with it a bit. This conjures a great image by the way : ) ~rrl
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This reminds me of the Coneheads...~Green
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