unanswered prayer
child on bloodied knees cries for
dad's ressurection

there is a 5-7-5 format for Ku right?...dra
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Sometimes an image fits in less than 17 syllables, which I think is okay.. I think it was Basho who said something along the lines of..learn the rules, then break them. I like the image this gives..enjoyed thanks..
on bloodied knees
a child cries heavenward
"come back dad"
alice

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thanks alice.
dra
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As a dear friend once said, "Honest relatin' is just devastatin'!" This one devastates me. Lida Jo