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Haiku - Two
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Poem Number 1922
jungle sands deformed bristle leaves
unvile the gleams
2 weaks
vaguely springs
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Dear Anon, While this is obscure for my literal mind to grasp, I admire the image it evokes even though I don't understand it. That is the mark of a good poem. It is distilled thought and will produce a mental image if well crafted. Good work! Lida Jo
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