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Haiku - Two
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Poem Number 1787
cold grey river stones
untouched by sunshine's warm rays
safe in liquid arms
Commentary:
fluid lovers touch
caressed in adoration
protective embrace
~rrl
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^^
nose-to-nose in an
underwater world his kiss
in her arms - no breath
^^
I remember when my first husband and I used to swim together. Lovely!
GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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nose-to-nose
underwater world
breathless kiss
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