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Poem Number 1780
woven sounds
cross the tiled hallway
hear your laugh
Commentary:
down the hallway
laughter sings, becoming
your alarm clock...~Q~
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now That would be a nice alarm clock ~Q : ).....rrl
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she doesn't know
i can hear her humming
in the bathroom................RAS
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new relationship
trying to make the other
think you don't make noise....hehe
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these gas pains -
why don't you check the
kitchen, love?
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once sweet laughter
now crosses tiled hallway
echoes with hers
^^
GrandmaThing--May you know love!
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silent echoes roar
where once sweet laughter flowed
loveless heart once more
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