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Poem Number 1720
Blue orchid skies
a far-off boat moves on
the morning sea
Commentary:
sorry about the caps.....a
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what a beautiful picture alice, water scenes are one of the things i miss most from Long Island...40
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thanks 40..I have only lived near the sea for 15 months.. don't know how I lived without it :)).....alice
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Very good thought but you might try...
Light blue orchid sky
A small far-off boat sails on
The calm morning sea...Jim
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