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Poem Number 1702
soft wind dies
in a wailful choir the
small gnats mourn
Commentary:
lovely, alice. i can just picture this...from a safe distance:) myrtle909
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thanks myrtle909. Don't you hate it when they make that highpitched wail in the dark silence? :).....alice
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Got a picture of many gnats living and creating the wail and then suddenly dieing for what ever reason and the sound is now silent. Sad that they too live only just a short time. But good for us I spose. Pesky little critters....m4r
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