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Poem Number 1645
You
Me...then I
Us?
Commentary:
Just a simple question wondering why such a simple and tiny word never passes through his lips
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He suggest
what we should do in the future
We as in "he" and "I" separetly
I can't help but trust
that he means what he says
but can't help but wonder
why nothing ever concerns "us"
-broken
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thoughts of you
and me, not enough
room for us.....alice
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