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Haiku - Two
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Poem Number 1640
soft edges of love
shine like light through tenderness
two hearts with one beat
Commentary:
I really think it should have been two hearts "in" one beat
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broken
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caressing silence
felt through the touch of your eyes
on me tenderly
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(still) broken
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tenderly
your eyes carress
my soul...lilith
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either way broken, it's still poetry in motion and breath-taking, well written friend...40
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