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Poem Number 1630
Why
would you kiss
me?
Commentary:
your kiss
draws me deeper
within...............fredricka
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your depth
leaves me to
shudder.....~fred
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Why is love
it's longings, it's depth
so painful?.....~fredski
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Cuz
I want
To..Sydnie
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cuz
i want
you.....fredinski
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why
do you want
me?....~fredoople
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'cuz
i tree
you........fredalea
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I
flower
you....~fredwalla
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...and
always
will....fredagia
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Sorely missing Fredopia and Frealina here. Would like to hear or rather see what they have to say in regards to these..Sydnie
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why would
you kiss him-
not me?.......fredopia
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