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Poem Number 1609
another year gone
taking with it lifes lost youth
but getting better


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another year gone
and with it fallen forests
future hope vanished.....a
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another year gone
and with it melting arctics
turbulent future....bb
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Did you just have a birthday? If so many belated happy wishes to you. If not then I guess I’m early with these wishes. At any rate the verse is good....m4r
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I don't know about 39 but I did yesterday...a yankee doodle dandy!........bb(47)
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY bb.. {{{{hug}}}..alice who is almost there
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Happy Birthday 39 (ahem) 40!!! and Happy Birthday to you bb....may you both know many more....Q
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Happy 40 to classic 38. Hope your trip to Savanah proved enjoyable.
Happy 47 BB and may there be many more for both of you.--GrandmaThing--
May you know love.
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By all means you too bb. As usual I'm a day late and a dollar short....m4r....who has already been there
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Hope your day was delicious!...~Green
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thank-you all i may have aged but the maturing process still baffles me- so i'm 19 for the last 21 years..... as for the above comment- spelling counts and please get yourself some tic-tacs..........classic40
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Following in your footsteps, classic 40, thanking all of you for your kind wishes and fond affections. Though seemingly another year older I still awaken each and every morning with a prayer that, if this day should be my last, let me live it in awareness of all life, all others, and myself with love......bb
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Oh, and a very belated Happy Birthday to you, moon4rent...let's see..38 days late and countless millions short but still hope you had a great one!......bb
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SHHHHH was not going to have one this year.But thanks anyway....m4r
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Dude, I remember when it was classic 38! Have I really been here that long? Anyhow, I hope everyone who had a birthday here had a good one. Remember, you're not getting older - you're just getting better.
~O~ Coyote Moon ~O~
(who turns 19 in September)

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