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Poem Number 1585
Tired of the hurt
The caring exist no more
Eyes without depth cry
Commentary:
wounded
empty except
for pain.....rrl
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Candi::The "caring" do exist--we just have to know where to look.--Grandma
Thing--May you know love.
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give to me
your pain and sorrow
i love you.........just another Joe
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neglected child
full of recycled tears
evaporates
.....m909
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no one cares
that part that once was
is no more
^^
GT
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