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Poem Number 1573
long ago when life
started becoming a chore
the lazy sat down
Commentary:
39::That's what made this world such a mess. We all think we should have
something without working for it, i.e. lotteries. (I'm guilty of that one.)
But, results are well worth working for--like classic 39's haiku, even if they
are not Shiki Haiku. I like Basho's imaginative ones anyhow.--GrandmaThing--
May you fly high and soar free.
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