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Poem Number 1572
shovel filled with dirt
fresh ground ready for new life
greeted by the sun
Commentary:
he is really gone
shovel of dirt on the grave
wash my trembling hands...james
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Handful of soil
Thrown onto the casket
My last contact
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Handful of earth
moist from my tears, sprinkled
goodbye my friend....m4r
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family of three
exit cemetery gate
father left inside
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Saw this yesterday- so sad. They were so young.--GrandmaThing--Know love.
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wonderful haiku GT.... so sad.....alice
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Thanks, Alice. Always nice to know we did one right.--GT--Know love.
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shovel filled with dirt
and with mother earth's promise
flowers bloom again
...cinnabar
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