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Poem Number 1570
a quiet guest
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he came to drink
like a guest quietly
soft-belied snake
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sorry... excuse first line....a
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time knows not
the hourglass slithers
copperhead
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wish mine were as docile, alice....bb, carrying a stick and wielding a crop, trying to run electric primaries through the brush.
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I think I would die if there was ever anything but the lowly garter snake to appear to me. Am scared to death of them. You both can keep all of them out/over/under or where ever....m4r
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so you like the green ones moon?----hehehe---jake
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NO don't like them green thingies either. Now if you could find something in a nice shade of purple I might think twice.:o}....m4r
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