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Poem Number 1545
tiny hands
move slowly over
grandpa's face
Commentary:
Very nice alice, made me smile. Thanks........DRQ
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thanks DRQ, very nice to see you.....alice
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Alice - another haiku that ropes the reader in. PG
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Two little hands grasp
Grandmas stroke riddin body
Can you see me now?....m4r...My son did this when his Great Grandma had a stroke. He climbed into her lap and literally grabbed her to make her look at him. He was all of 4 years old and offered to cook her a grilled cheese sandwich, at which she laughed. Was the last thing he heard from her lips. She died shortly after that.But he still remembers it to this day
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keep people alive
with past memories of love
don't go, I love you
^^
GT
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