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Poem Number 1540
men stand at auction
hold a hot dog and converse
cold food for lunch
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Commentary:
Auction lunch break
punctuated by
hot bites and bids.
PG
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convention
sandwich shop patrons
with nametags.....................RAS
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Lunch queue
name tags
parallel.PG
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auctions
someone’s past life
bargain....m4r....Just love to go to auctions
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hammer falls
between cheese crackers
and hot pies.....a
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six men huddle close
whispers of rigging the bids
greenbacks slipped through....sutured
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