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Poem Number 1538
its not
enough to
love her
Commentary:
pouring
myself through a
funnel
~~
trying
to reach
her heart
~~
opening
is
closing
~~
my tears
mean
nothing
~~
my love
is
futile
~~
my heart
is
dying...q
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beat once more
oh heart of plenty
not your time......39
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Q - pouring myself through a funnel. WOW! PG
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that is exactly how i felt at the time PG...like i was giving so much and she was closing herself more and more off from me...was quite heartbreaking for a mother....so i poured myself down this page...hope you dont mind my nonhaiku...keash
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