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Poem Number 1533
Tender words
Which melt my heart
strengthen soul
Commentary:
Replace *my* with *the* and I think it sounds better....m4r
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That is if we are to follow the rules....m4r
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m4r::...but we don't always follow rules do we? A few months back someone said
that Basho(haiku master) said that one should learn the rules then
immediately forget them. I'm considering that.--GrandmaThing--Know love.
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Never knew them till just recently and I agree with you....m4r
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