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Poem Number 1508
chopping onions
handset on my shoulder
her lilting voice
Commentary:
Stamped RAS before I turned to authors..I can see this clearly RAS, just watch that sharp knife :).......alice
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some of my stupidest moments have occurred in the kitchen, alice.....RAS, lying about the scars on his hands ;-)
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could it be
that my tears came from
your onions?..........cecily :)
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not onions
perhaps inane jokes
brought those tears................RAS
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yeah, that too....;-)...cecily
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tears of laughter
brought this horrible pain
it hurts so good....m4r
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