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Poem Number 1500
purple silk blows
for a moment I see
more than her eyes
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A lovely poem Ma'am. Rich and provocative. Thank you ····· robbynl
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this was so pretty. i can imagine the purple silk exposing her graceful legs (a lot of her legs). ~~cleosbarge
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interesting, i pictured a silk blouse exposing a bit too much cleavage...funny how we read between the lines...~Q~
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and i thought of a woman, olive-skinned, with a veil covering all but her eyes...til a breeze reveals her face for a moment. :) good work
myrtle909
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thank you robbynl, cleosbarge, ~Q~ and myrtle909....glad you all got something different from this, as did I........alice :)
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though i should not look
the wind is my accomplice
silk lifts revealing...james
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