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Poem Number 1295
eye level
mother on her knees
kissing owie
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took me a second to parse this one, but once I got it, made me smile - nice motherly image, ~Q~..........RAS (who's "owie"?)
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hehe i sort of knew when i added those lines that "someone" would misinterpret the message. yes, nice, motherly image, leave it at that. LOL ~Q~
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