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Poem Number 1237
a shower of rain
may ease, but won't stop, the
dance of the heatwave


Commentary:
such dry, sticky heat
quick, let's all jump in the car
and off to the beach
...cinnabar
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Dry sticky heat
Quick lets get naked
And make a baby!...cinnabar

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second verse is not mine. whoever you are, write your own stuff, or go jump!
...cinnabar
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brief shower
the sauna becomes
a steam bath..............RAS
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cinnabar--I don't believe anyone should invade another's poetry, but,
the type might am"o"use (did I say that?) Buson. According to "Intro-
duction to Haiku" by Harold G. Henderson, page 98, "This at least
tends to support the opinion that the second poem contains somewhat
pornographic suggestions, which can be found in a considerable number
of Buson's haiku." Of course there is always "good" taste and "bad",
even in poetry.--GrandmaThing--Sooooooooo, we're not the first-1715-1783.
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I don't really care if pornography is used in Buson's haiku. 'Dry sticky heat' was written by some idiot who signed my name and I don't own their thoughts. In my comment to that particular person I should have written 'sign your OWN name on your own stuff, or go jump'.
...cinnabar
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I have a blister
From these stupid pink sandals
Shaped like an ox head ...cinnabar

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I have a feeling that this wasn't writ by cinnabar either, true? ---MJ
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Oh well, I guess that's the price for being famous. Later, people.
...cinnabar
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cinnabar, don't let some asshole run you off
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For heavens sake NO don't go. My mom used to tell me to concider the source and be a bigger person than they are....m4r
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Don't talk to me now
I am high in the mountains
seeking my elders.
(no, just kidding)First, my apologies to you Grandma Thing. I didn't mean to be so abrupt. I have cooled off now. Anger has gone and peace prevails once more which means I can see the forest through the trees and I don't really want to leave this site. I am addicted to the genuine people who write in here. Thank you MJ and m4r.
...cinnabar
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