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Poem Number 1201
eyes were never sadder
than the ones within my mirror
staring back through me
Commentary:
Have you been looking in the mirror with me each morning? You captured my
feelings exactly, like you crawled inside my mind.
opto
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i didn't have to crawl inside, opto, i have been there all the time...hehe...~Q~ :)
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mirror glances
your eyes stare back
through mine
~~~eerie being kindred spirits, huh????~~~
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I have felt it since the first poem of yours I read.
Its not eerie but peaceful.
opto
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