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Poem Number 1197
The last serenade
Minstrel strums a joyless song
As she walks away
Commentary:
?????????Is serenader losing voice?
????is he asking her to go?
??joyless song means something happening-what does minstrel know that we
don't know?
?????Is serenader leaving us? Is "she" leaving us?
Very nicely written. Asks good questions.-GrandmaThing--Know love.
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wow Momma Thing...i saw it as her walking away from him, while he grieved the loss, i am not sure how Birdman sees it...~Quiche~who'll never know love.....
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take songs from my heart
day you leave...no songs suffice
lovers or children.......TT64
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took music from world
my heart no longer can sing--
hum me remembrance...TT64
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